Friday, August 1, 2008

it feels this way

i feel like everyone wants something
but no one cares what i want
i'm asked what i want
but no one hears
i think

it feels that way

i feel like i give and give
and people take and take
and want more and then take offense
when i balk
but no one sees it as i do
i think

it feels this way

i feel like i reached my limit
i have nothing to give right now
i don't want to give right now
i need people to hear this
they aren't listening
i think

it feels this way

2 comments:

JD said...

I love the line breaks in this...how they affect the perception while reading. Very nice. And, in regards to the prior entry, you should do a blog with nothing but pictures of you in the glory of your goddessness!

Keep rocking & writing!

~ Joanna

Anonymous said...

So very poetic and real. i really like it. clarity. good writing! xxoo sarah